"white band at the top - but you justifiedDue to the very rushed nature of the crit I wasn't actually able to demonstrate about a third of my site but I'm fairly pleased with the feedback I did receive on my site. It was mostly just slight stylistic and organisational changes and I plan to act on all feedback that hasn't been marked as justified.
change the background colour of the other things- not worth it
move the mailing list
more- things- change name- put mailing list in pink band
change search text
hard to tell about the 4 boxes in the middle-
artists names- been separated by pink stuff-
more artists on the homepage
colour band change- justified
buzzing with activity - you dog
family festival - is separate = not your target audience
refine the information- too much stuff-
remove sidebars on shop/"
The only major disappointment for me was the fact that I only received feedback from my tutor and the WordPress developer who came in for the crit, because of the time constraints. The reason I feel like this devalued the crit significantly is because my whole class is firmly within my target demographic so any input from them would have been very valuable to me.